Complete end of chapter expercise 4.8. Do questions a through e on page 121. Remember that the final revisions should stress politeness and reader benefits. So you should still be thinking of ways to incorporate the “you view” when possible. What you’re attempting to do is get the best response from the reader. So threatening them, insulting them, or being bossy or rude isn’t what you’re looking for. You want the reader to react positively, because they are way more likely to do what you want them to do when they feel like they are being treated with respect.