Hello,
I am an international student studying in English school.
This is an essay due at 3 AM this morning.
I only have my last chance to edit my essay.
First, I want you to read the original essay + my old essay + my teacher’s feed back.
My teacher said that I am on the right truck but I have many details and I should follow her feed back (recommendations). I got 30 out of 50 points.
I just started to write the introduction + thesis statement, and I need you to complete my essay.
please use intermediate vocabulary.
Thank you,
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