I wrote the essay but it needs to be edited and revised
I attached the file and the following should be done:
This essay needs to be clarified and edited
add more on to my points
needs to be plagiarism proof and pass safe assign
All of the quotes need to be removed and paraphrased instead
add 2 pages to the file
It should be rewritten to remove the errors and all of the grammatical errors should be removed.
This entire essay should not have quotes
Needs to include many more sources
It is under sourced and vague. Improve on the sources and on the relationship between particular neo-liberal policy and inequality. Clarify as to why I chose Haitii and China and explain the claims. Focus more on particular types of policies.
references need to be in APSA and checked on to make sure they are correct

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