Please revise 3 essay, make them 800 words each
Please follow theses requirement.
. | Yes | Yes | Yes | Yes |
2. ORGANIZATION: Is the essay organized in an effective manner? Does it have an introduction, body and conclusion? Are the paragraphs well-focused on particular topics, with effective transitions between them? Explain how the writer might improve the organization of the essay. |
Yes | No | No | Yes |
3. DEVELOPMENT AND SPECIFICITY OF EVIDENCE: Does the writer present examples, arguments or other evidence to support her/his opinion? |
Many (more than 2) | Some (1 or 2) | Many (more than 2) | Many (more than 2) |
4. DEVELOPMENT AND SPECIFICITY OF EVIDENCE: Is the evidence developed in a way that moves from general statement to specific detail? How might each example be more fully developed? |
Many (more than 2) | Some (1 or 2) | Many (more than 2) | Many (more than 2) |
5. SENTENCE STRUCTURE, STYLE AND WORD CHOICE: In general, are the sentences clear and easy to understand? |
Yes | Yes | Yes | Yes |
6. SENTENCE STRUCTURE, STYLE AND WORD CHOICE: Does the writer use specific words with meanings that fit the ideas of the essay? List any general, vague or improper words that are used in the essay. |
Yes | Yes | Yes | No |
7. GRAMMAR, PUNCTUATION & MECHANICS: Does the essay contain any grammar, punctuation or mechanical errors that make your understanding of the content difficult or draw your attention away from the content of the essay? If so, what errors do you notice? |
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