Topic: How UK’s Companies will be affected if the UK exited from the EU. The title is vast and I want narrow like a sales for company or revenue for company , UK’s manufacturer companies, or the market London because is big,
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The title is vast and I want narrow like a sales for company or revenue for company , UK’s manufacturer companies, or the market London because is big,
first my old order is 81627314 and got score is fail.
before start with new proposal review old proposal and show feedback number 13, Also, before start can you let me know on message board
feedback
I got the score and I failed because the title is vast and supervisor wants a specific title narrow
idea is good and writing is good but the title is vast and he want narrow
I want same title but narrow
how UK’s companies will be affected if the UK exited from the EU
like a sales for company or revenue for company , UK’s manufacturer companies, or the market London because is big,
Also, this some notes from supervisor
the title is vast.
Define ‘best results’. do you mean sales, satisfaction, exposure, improvement in communication? this need thought. the subject is potentially vast so you need to narrow your subject down, and ensure you are able to acquire the required seconary or primary data. I offer the following feedback.
Research Question
a good area for research and an interesting topic. you should start by posing one open question and then the rest will follow. it’s too vague as it stands and will require further defining.
Explanation;
see above. this is why you need to think about your actual question more carefully. you want to explore what exactly? how? why is this so important? how will you investigate this? what aspects? your literature review is quite short, more could have been made of this
literature review;
very good but once you refine your question, this area will become cleaner and clearer, and your literature list more natural and suited for purpose.
methodology;
this is too general. you need to think about more source more deeply and then align them with your final research question.
time schedule;
attempted, shows thought and consideration but need to be more detailed. I would try to change this so you give yourself a margin of error. Issues always crop and if you plan down a ’T’ (english saying, I will explain) you run risks.
in summary, you need to narrow down your ideas, and explain more about how you plan to carry out the piece of work, in specific terms you collection of data, and the exact nature of your question.
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