A couple of points: your research seems incomplete (there are a few factual errors) and some of the sentences are nebulous and hard to understand. There are some good texts on both works, you should look into scholarly publications (hard copies are still a great source for all of us).

my instructor edited my I Search Paper so, you need to read and change some parft of it that she edited .

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