The Paper is done but I need to rework according to teacher. The documents are attached to be reworked.
Improve, and rework your thesis – strong thesis
The outline is very detailed for the first two sections and then more general for the last two. Be sure to add the necessary details before you begin writing.
Th paper should follow the pattern of the outline.
Also, be sure to consult the following website to help you with citing sources both in-text and in your Works Cited page: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/
I need to get the rework for all this.