Violent Media is Good for Kids

I already write my own paper and the professor have some comments and I need someone to to fix it .

I will attached the original article with my original paper and the professor comments

Also I will attache the instruction and the grading rubric please check it and make sure the paper is good and all the instructors.

So please read the professor feedback and fix it and read the instructors and the grading rubric to make sure everything is fine