after the quoting use your own summary and analysis to help us better understand each source’s main points
My teacher comments:
I think some of your revisions here do a nice job clarifying the insight you’re taking from your sources, but I’d still like to see sources connected a bit more in terms of your overall question.
I’d also still like to see you quoting from sources more and working with your sources actual language and claims. Try to identify some areas where you can bring in a meaningful quote from a source to show what exactly they’re saying. (Then use your own summary and analysis to help us better understand each source’s main points.)